Comment on the best bits: This is light and funny. The old lady is a lucky chance. The casting is dead right (I don't know why, but they just look right).
Things you can improve: A lot of the shots are very jerky - when you use the tripod, you need to slack off the pan head only until you can pan and tilt smoothly.
Marks are out of 3 for this:
0 means you haven't done it.
1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.
Medium Shot MS 2
Long Shot LS 3
Close Up CU 1
XLS - extreme long shot 1
XCU - extreme close up 0
Cross focus 2
Deep focus 3
Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 1
Point of View - POV 1
Use of tripod 1
Shot - reverse shot 3
Establishing shot 3
Total out of 54 = 34 = 63% = C
Evaluation is fair to good, and could have more about the technicalities of what you did. 6.5/10, C