The Package: Result

Comment on the best bits: This is light and funny. The old lady is a lucky chance. The casting is dead right (I don't know why, but they just look right).

Things you can improve: A lot of the shots are very jerky - when you use the tripod, you need to slack off the pan head only until you can pan and tilt smoothly.

Marks are out of 3 for this:

0 means you haven't done it.

1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.

2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.

3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.

CAMERA

Medium Shot MS 2

Long Shot LS 3

Close Up CU 1

XLS - extreme long shot 1

XCU - extreme close up 0

Pan 3

Tilt 2

Zoom 2

Cross focus 2

Deep focus 3

Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 1

Point of View - POV 1

Use of tripod 1

EDIT

Shot - reverse shot 3

Establishing shot 3

Cut 3

Dissolve3

Total out of 54 = 34 = 63% = C

Evaluation is fair to good, and could have more about the technicalities of what you did. 6.5/10, C